Wednesday, July 18, 2012

Two Dark Submission Stories

Writing Journal: Plowing through slowly on The Adjusters #33, fighting off my tendency to head deep into the dark forest of Expositoria. I'm also starting an editing pass at the whole of Book II for submission to the EMCSA. For that, I'm thinking of cutting up the installments into smaller chunks. I'm not terribly sure how that's going to go.



Sorry for the silence, folks. Life has quieted down somewhat since the end of June, but a consequence of going a hundred and fifty percent for a few months is that when the pressure lets up, my energy and my spirit both tank. The usual anticlimax reaction.

Which is reflected in the smut I've been reading. I've been hanging out on BDSM Library, reading dark submission fantasies. Here's a sample of what caught my eyes, in case you find yourself in a similar mood.

First, C.U.F.F.S. by DJ: “A story about a young couple's journey intending on pushing their sexual excitement to the limits they thought each other wanted but an unexpected detour took them down an ever deepening fall into humiliation, depravation, pain and finally total forced slavery.” I was looking for a long story, and found it in this one. The writing is somewhat sprawling, and it suffers from the unfortunately typical BDSM-library typographical mishaps (apostrophes and quotes coming out as unrecognized characters, etc), but the scenes of deep dark submissions are quite hot. Basically, it's about a couple that gets in way over their head with a dominant master. And there's a secondary character that turns to blackmail as well, so it's a double-whammy if you're into that sort of thing.

Second, Taxing Times by Ededas: “Elaine Salvage is a 27 year old graduate tax officer. She is beautiful, highly intelligent and destined for the top. Until she makes the mistake of angering Keith Fields, a multi-millionare business man with a sex and vice empire and some sadistic ideas on having fun.” Dark, forced submission, with some amount of physical torture. You know, the works. The characters are interesting in this one—not the two in the description, but the two in charge of training poor Elaine.

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