Writing Journal: Midway through The Adjusters #39. It really wants to be longer than a single installment, and I'm loath to break it up. It'll need some serious work to chop it down to size. Thankfully, I overwrite like crazy, so it shouldn't be too difficult. Oh, and I think I got the title for Book IV: Running to Stand Still.
Sadly, I've found little on the EMCSA that has grabbed my attention lately. I'm not entirely sure why. It may just be a mood thing.
I had high hopes for Isn’t It Good, His Morning Wood, by Only A. Passenger: “At the beginning, Mark isn’t sure if he suffers or enjoys certain side-effects of the medical trial he’s taking part in. It doesn’t take long before he’s determined to enjoy them, very much—if he can figure out how to control it all, that is.” But I just can't get into it. The writing's a bit too... I don't know... odd for my taste right now. Don't get me wrong, it's well written. Maybe that's it—it's too well written. Very metaphorical, almost ethereal. Have a look and judge for yourself, as it may just be up your alley.
On the flip side, Rikimaru posted the last chapter of their story In Heat which I talked about before. A nice ending to a nice story.
Over on Literotica, we have a sweet short mind-control story, Compromised, by Ironiclaconic: “Save your marriage or your money back.” I really love the idea underlying this story, and it's a lot sweeter than what I usually point you to. Just to show you that I'm not all angst all the time.
There's also a new wife-sharing story I'm following, The Convention, by Feverman. No official description, but the author says, “The Convention is a hard-core, wife-watching novella that eventually involves corruption, attempted blackmail, betrayal, revenge and heaping helping of forbidden sex of various kinds.” I know, right? Who can resist that? To be fair, knowing the author, I doubt it's going to go that dark, but I've still got my hopes up. (The author also has another story with a similar theme, although with no threat of blackmail or corruption, The Week.)
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Sunday, February 24, 2013
Saturday, November 24, 2012
A Bag of Mind-Control Stories
Writing Journal: I'm almost finished revising The Adjusters #35, and I'm about halfway done writing #36. It's going slowly, very slowly. Too slowly, in fact. But at least I know what #36 and #37 are all about, and #37 should be the end of Book III—unless it comes out too long, and then I'll have to push some kind of epilogue into #38. But I'd rather avoid doing that. And then, time to start or rather continue writing Book IV, where we catch up with Jenn, which will be a bitch to write for reasons all of its own...
I hope all of you that celebrated Thanksgiving earlier this week had a wonderful time. I certainly did.
As I feared I would be, I've been incredibly busy these last few weeks, so little time to catch up with smut. Thankfully, I have accumulated a bunch of links to mind-control stories that caught my eye in the past few months, and that you may also find interesting.
The first three are rather dark stories where a victim is turned helpless to resist either orders from others, or her own prurient impulses.
In Heat, by Rikimaru: “Tiffany is drugged by John.” Poor Tiffany, who hardly deserved her fate. But quite hot. (ASSTR and by extension the EMCSA has been having problems lately, so refresh often if there are issues accessing the existing seven parts of this story.)
Dare Me Not, by Vexcave: “Janine can't resist a dare after listening to an audio CD.” Poor Janine, who also hardly deserved her fate.
Bossing the Boss, by Fourscore: “Frustrated worker controls his controlling boss.” Poor Suzanne, who maybe deserved her fate a bit more.
Next up, a slightly different take on mind control. Becoming Dominant, by Dirtysillythoughts: “Casey learns of his power through a very sexy mentor.” This is all about Casey discovering he's a dominant, who can assert his will on others. But instead of going on a crazy binge screwing every girl he runs across, he's taken in by his stepmother who teaches him about his gift in a rather special way. Some very interesting scenes in here. The story seems to be ongoing.
Finally, this one is listed as mind control, but frankly, it's not really that. The author, Nsiom, justifies the label by saying that getting someone to do something that they would not do otherwise by offering them enough money is a form of mind control, but I don't buy it. Thankfully, I don't have to, because the story is great even without that label. It's Busford: “People will do anything for money.” Busford is a smug uncouth bastard, but he's got money, and he likes to use it to satisfy his baser instincts. And he's happy to share the wealth with his friends. Some sweetly twisted scenes in there that are almost more effective than had the author used straight-up mind control.
I hope all of you that celebrated Thanksgiving earlier this week had a wonderful time. I certainly did.
As I feared I would be, I've been incredibly busy these last few weeks, so little time to catch up with smut. Thankfully, I have accumulated a bunch of links to mind-control stories that caught my eye in the past few months, and that you may also find interesting.
The first three are rather dark stories where a victim is turned helpless to resist either orders from others, or her own prurient impulses.
In Heat, by Rikimaru: “Tiffany is drugged by John.” Poor Tiffany, who hardly deserved her fate. But quite hot. (ASSTR and by extension the EMCSA has been having problems lately, so refresh often if there are issues accessing the existing seven parts of this story.)
Dare Me Not, by Vexcave: “Janine can't resist a dare after listening to an audio CD.” Poor Janine, who also hardly deserved her fate.
Bossing the Boss, by Fourscore: “Frustrated worker controls his controlling boss.” Poor Suzanne, who maybe deserved her fate a bit more.
Next up, a slightly different take on mind control. Becoming Dominant, by Dirtysillythoughts: “Casey learns of his power through a very sexy mentor.” This is all about Casey discovering he's a dominant, who can assert his will on others. But instead of going on a crazy binge screwing every girl he runs across, he's taken in by his stepmother who teaches him about his gift in a rather special way. Some very interesting scenes in here. The story seems to be ongoing.
Finally, this one is listed as mind control, but frankly, it's not really that. The author, Nsiom, justifies the label by saying that getting someone to do something that they would not do otherwise by offering them enough money is a form of mind control, but I don't buy it. Thankfully, I don't have to, because the story is great even without that label. It's Busford: “People will do anything for money.” Busford is a smug uncouth bastard, but he's got money, and he likes to use it to satisfy his baser instincts. And he's happy to share the wealth with his friends. Some sweetly twisted scenes in there that are almost more effective than had the author used straight-up mind control.
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