Writing Journal: Still gently slogging through The Adjusters #52 and #53. It's all good, if slow.
Throughout May and June, I'm asking for your input about the sort of kinks you might want to see in The Adjusters.
Sorry for the silence—I was away and also nothing particularly interesting came through my smut feed, except for a few chapters updates to stories that I'm tracking. Might as well get those out of the way.
A new chapter of Ashley's Revenge by TallMarriedMan: “Ashley gives him a gift that she knows his wife never would.” The story is still excellent.
A new chapter of Consequences by Xleglover: “Jen and Mike ‘separate’ and Jen moves in with Frankie.” A straight-up cuckold husband story, one that seems to leave few people unaffected (either in a good way or a bad way), but with some pretty interesting ideas and scenes. Xleglover is a bit of an acquired taste, and recently his stories do sometimes seem to spin without going anywhere. This one is no exception. But I still enjoy it. (Though I wish it went darker than it undoubtedly will go, more like Husband's Fantasy Backfires.)
Finally, a new mind-control story, The Coin by Ryansstory: “Ryan discovers that no good deed goes unrewarded...” Four chapters out at the time of this post, and it seems to be headed in a dark direction. A man finds a coin that gives him mind-controlling powers, but it's not entirely clear that the coin isn't actually controlling him. I'm looking forward to see if it goes anywhere.
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Wednesday, February 15, 2012
Stories About Wives Being Used and Abused
Writing Journal: It's mid-February, and I'm gently hacking away at The Adjusters #31, my appendix (addendum? postscript? thing-I-don't-know-the-name-of?) It's already up to 8000 words, which is too much because it's not even halfway done. And I know that the main reason I'm building up the word count is to delay the inevitable—where the inevitable is of course getting to the end, because I have no freakin' idea how it ends...
I was away from my computer this weekend, which explains my lack of posting. I'm presuming nobody really cared. My gut feeling is that the audience for this blog is not literally hanging on to my every word. If you feel otherwise, please holler, and I'll work harder at keeping you appraised of possible interruptions of service.
Onwards, story-wise. I ran into a story on Storiesonline a couple of days ago for which my only response was a heartfelt Holy Fuck! It's by the grandiosely named God Of Porn, and it's called Imaginary Man: “A loving husband tries to persuade his beautiful black wife into cheating on him with white men.” It starts out as a pretty standard cuckold story, albeit with a reversal of the typical interracial stereotype common to such stories, but then you hit chapter 4 and it veers left into crazy hot territory. The psychology of the characters feels right, which is rare in such stories. The story's ongoing, and I hope that the author continues with it, because I'm really keen to see where it's going, and how it's getting there.
While we're on the topic, take a look at some classics on a similar theme of wives used and abused.
Lisa Laten and Not My Story wrote Poker Wife: “A young bride is tricked into having sex with her husbands friends. She falls deeper into degradation as she is blackmailed into becoming a sex slave for the pleasures of others. She discovers this has all been done to her to get revenge on her older sister but it is already to late for poor Lisa.” Definitely a classic of the genre, and the corruption of the wife and is nicely done. The story was started by Lisa Laten and eventually completed by Not My Story. The story, according to the author (not sure which of the two), was in tribute a few classics including the hilarious Randy Raped my Wife by Carnal Knowledge: “Husband lets his friend rape his wife, while he watches.” Hilarious in that the story is so over the top yet played straight, not because of the subject matter. In fact, I think this was the first story I ever read where there was nonconsensual sex that did not involve mind control. I seem to recall also that there was more to this story than posted above, but I have not been able to find the rest, if it ever existed.
And this brings us to an all-time favorite of mine in the genre, Rusty Shackleford's The Cop's Wife: “Police officer Tom Barkley had arrested Marcus Dupree on the charge of dealing cocaine, and had testified against him at the trial. After Marcus was sent to jail, Tom sold the dealer's coke, and the word of this got back to Marcus. Now that he was out of jail, having served his time, he was going to extract his revenge on Tom by making his wife his whore and fuck toy.” Straight up, and taking no scenic detour to get to the juicy bits, this is fine smut right there. It's twisted in all the right ways. The video scene in Part 2 sold the story for me, years ago...
I was away from my computer this weekend, which explains my lack of posting. I'm presuming nobody really cared. My gut feeling is that the audience for this blog is not literally hanging on to my every word. If you feel otherwise, please holler, and I'll work harder at keeping you appraised of possible interruptions of service.
Onwards, story-wise. I ran into a story on Storiesonline a couple of days ago for which my only response was a heartfelt Holy Fuck! It's by the grandiosely named God Of Porn, and it's called Imaginary Man: “A loving husband tries to persuade his beautiful black wife into cheating on him with white men.” It starts out as a pretty standard cuckold story, albeit with a reversal of the typical interracial stereotype common to such stories, but then you hit chapter 4 and it veers left into crazy hot territory. The psychology of the characters feels right, which is rare in such stories. The story's ongoing, and I hope that the author continues with it, because I'm really keen to see where it's going, and how it's getting there.
While we're on the topic, take a look at some classics on a similar theme of wives used and abused.
Lisa Laten and Not My Story wrote Poker Wife: “A young bride is tricked into having sex with her husbands friends. She falls deeper into degradation as she is blackmailed into becoming a sex slave for the pleasures of others. She discovers this has all been done to her to get revenge on her older sister but it is already to late for poor Lisa.” Definitely a classic of the genre, and the corruption of the wife and is nicely done. The story was started by Lisa Laten and eventually completed by Not My Story. The story, according to the author (not sure which of the two), was in tribute a few classics including the hilarious Randy Raped my Wife by Carnal Knowledge: “Husband lets his friend rape his wife, while he watches.” Hilarious in that the story is so over the top yet played straight, not because of the subject matter. In fact, I think this was the first story I ever read where there was nonconsensual sex that did not involve mind control. I seem to recall also that there was more to this story than posted above, but I have not been able to find the rest, if it ever existed.
And this brings us to an all-time favorite of mine in the genre, Rusty Shackleford's The Cop's Wife: “Police officer Tom Barkley had arrested Marcus Dupree on the charge of dealing cocaine, and had testified against him at the trial. After Marcus was sent to jail, Tom sold the dealer's coke, and the word of this got back to Marcus. Now that he was out of jail, having served his time, he was going to extract his revenge on Tom by making his wife his whore and fuck toy.” Straight up, and taking no scenic detour to get to the juicy bits, this is fine smut right there. It's twisted in all the right ways. The video scene in Part 2 sold the story for me, years ago...
Wednesday, November 30, 2011
Two Long Stories
Writing Journal: Finished a draft of The Adjusters #27. It's clocking at more than 14000 words. Way too much. But the episode is the episode, and splitting it in two wouldn't work so well. Sigh. So much for trying to stick to the 6000–8000 words range per episode. Now, to finish revising #23, which goes out tomorrow (possibly late in the evening, be warned). Then, I can fight with #28, the DIK-Bash.
I've got two long stories that I came across and read over the last few weeks and which may be of interest to the lot of you.
The first is a great and still ongoing tale. Started in 2006 by expatdad, it's called An African Seduction: “A modern career minded, churchgoing mother, attracts the interest of a rich African rakehell in Zimbabwe.” Somewhat cuckold-ish, but it's mostly a story about a beautiful woman willing to demean herself to please the man she falls in love with, including giving up her own daughter's virginity. It starts slow—I didn't get into the story into the fourth chapter or so—but there are some amazingly hot scenes in there. At least one character's a minor though, so be warned.
The other long story to which I gave a try is a time-travel story, which I had to look at for completeness since it's more or less along the lines of what I want to do with my next project, Leapers. It's by Phil Brown, and it's called Second Time Through: “‘On top of that, I now find myself tied to a wealthy, hypersexual, 16 year old Empath, with a heretofore, unheard of skill set, and an unknown enemy that could strike at any time.’ Anna exclaimed. ‘Welcome to my new life!’ I thought.” This story starts out like your classic time-travel story—old man dies and gets reincarnated in a younger body several years in the past (not his own body), and wakes up as in many other such stories in a hospital with pretty nurses all around him. But after that, it gets real odd. The guy turns out to be an empath, and there is a bit of sex and lots of characters in the first dozen chapters. I will not finish this story. That's because while I do find some of the underlying plot points intriguing, the story itself hasn't grabbed me, and I stopped reading when everyone absconds to a nudist colony, because if there's something that really does not do it for me, it's nudism. It just ain't sexy to me. (That's one of the many reasons I never got into the Naked In School universe on Storiesonline.). However, since your mileage may vary, and it is actually well written, you should have a look and decide for yourself.
I've got two long stories that I came across and read over the last few weeks and which may be of interest to the lot of you.
The first is a great and still ongoing tale. Started in 2006 by expatdad, it's called An African Seduction: “A modern career minded, churchgoing mother, attracts the interest of a rich African rakehell in Zimbabwe.” Somewhat cuckold-ish, but it's mostly a story about a beautiful woman willing to demean herself to please the man she falls in love with, including giving up her own daughter's virginity. It starts slow—I didn't get into the story into the fourth chapter or so—but there are some amazingly hot scenes in there. At least one character's a minor though, so be warned.
The other long story to which I gave a try is a time-travel story, which I had to look at for completeness since it's more or less along the lines of what I want to do with my next project, Leapers. It's by Phil Brown, and it's called Second Time Through: “‘On top of that, I now find myself tied to a wealthy, hypersexual, 16 year old Empath, with a heretofore, unheard of skill set, and an unknown enemy that could strike at any time.’ Anna exclaimed. ‘Welcome to my new life!’ I thought.” This story starts out like your classic time-travel story—old man dies and gets reincarnated in a younger body several years in the past (not his own body), and wakes up as in many other such stories in a hospital with pretty nurses all around him. But after that, it gets real odd. The guy turns out to be an empath, and there is a bit of sex and lots of characters in the first dozen chapters. I will not finish this story. That's because while I do find some of the underlying plot points intriguing, the story itself hasn't grabbed me, and I stopped reading when everyone absconds to a nudist colony, because if there's something that really does not do it for me, it's nudism. It just ain't sexy to me. (That's one of the many reasons I never got into the Naked In School universe on Storiesonline.). However, since your mileage may vary, and it is actually well written, you should have a look and decide for yourself.
Saturday, October 1, 2011
Update on The Adjusters #21
The Adjusters #21 will be a day late—still a bit of rewriting that needs to be done. It should be posted tomorrow night. Sorry about this, and thanks for your patience.
Here's a decent story to keep you tied over. It's by The Big Bopper, and titled Working For His Promotion: “The boss seems to want his wife.” (Did I ever mention I both love and hate Literotica's story synopses? On the one hand, they are haiku-like in their brevity, but they also don't give you much to go on.) Basically, the story is that Adam Hamilton's boss really likes Adam's wife, and comes up with a plan that will benefit both Adam and his wife, and himself. But, of course, it all turns out to be the collective bite that they cannot all chew. It starts off as a somewhat typical cuck story, but then takes an interesting direction. Some very hot scenes, and some extremely hot scenes too. And at least one writer-rolls-his-eyes moment—see if you can spot it.
Here's a decent story to keep you tied over. It's by The Big Bopper, and titled Working For His Promotion: “The boss seems to want his wife.” (Did I ever mention I both love and hate Literotica's story synopses? On the one hand, they are haiku-like in their brevity, but they also don't give you much to go on.) Basically, the story is that Adam Hamilton's boss really likes Adam's wife, and comes up with a plan that will benefit both Adam and his wife, and himself. But, of course, it all turns out to be the collective bite that they cannot all chew. It starts off as a somewhat typical cuck story, but then takes an interesting direction. Some very hot scenes, and some extremely hot scenes too. And at least one writer-rolls-his-eyes moment—see if you can spot it.
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