Showing posts with label coercion. Show all posts
Showing posts with label coercion. Show all posts

Sunday, June 8, 2014

A New Chapter by GrantLee

Writing Journal: Excellent writing week, followed by a crappy writing weekend. Easy come, easy go, I guess. I did get started on The Adjusters #53, since there's no reason why it cannot be written in parallel with #52. And because we haven't had an installment this month, here's a (still raw and needing much editing) first stab at the beginning of #53, as a sort of preview:

James McGregor—Jim to his employees, Jimmy to his close friends—did not hesitate to cross the threshold of the nondescript building.

Whatever else one might say about James, and one could say many things about James and not all of them heartwarming, being prone to indecision was not one of them.

When James ran into a problem, James stopped long enough to determine the extent of that problem, formulate a plan to solve said problem, and then enact said plan. That approach had served him well for the previous twenty-five years, from the time he wrestled control of Electro Manufacturing Incorporated away from his then father-in-law and grew it into the largest industrial control panels manufacturer on the West Coast.

That approach had served him well years later when he determined that his then wife—the daughter of the father-in-law in question—after a solid fifteen-years marriage that had yielded two sons, was simply not worthy of being the wife of one of the most successful businessman on the West Coast. She was unhappy, and was letting herself go, and it had become almost embarrassing to be seen in her company.

When he realized that his then wife had become a liability, that she was a problem, he formulated a plan and enacted it without hesitation or pity. It had been a simple matter to hire a handsome out-of-work actor to seduce and sleep with his then wife, all the while having a private investigator follow the couple and document the affair in exquisite graphic detail. Armed with such incontrovertible evidence, suing her for divorce was a short and easy affair. James obtained custody of his son and managed to leave his ex-wife with hardly anything through a carefully orchestrated strategy of claiming great mental distress and public embarrassment. His wife’s lawyer did manage to obtain a one-time lump payment for relocation that James almost contested but in a show of magnanimity decided to let go. That the lump payment turned out to be less than the fee he had promised the out-of-work actor but never paid due to the poor fellow’s deportation proceedings back to Canada—his visa had expired a year prior, something that had not escaped James’s careful screening of potential candidates—proved almost poetic, something that James might have appreciated had he had any fondness for poetry.

“Welcome to Family Counseling Services,” said the pleasant young woman behind the reception desk, looking up at him with a blindingly white smile. “How may I help you?”


Throughout May and June, I'm asking for your input about the sort of kinks you might want to see in The Adjusters.



From out of nowhere today came a new chapter of Madison's Lesson by GrantLee: “Madison Benedict bent at her waist...” It's the story of a poor mother and ex-wife that is coerced into sex by, well, pretty much everybody, it seems. It's really good. But updates abysmally slowly.

At the other extreme, here's a weird but entertaining story, Alex in Pornoland by SirSinn: “Alex wakes up to a different world after an accident.” Warning: incest, and large artificial breasts.



Wednesday, June 4, 2014

Mid-Week Blues

Writing Journal: Crap. I wrote a whole scene with a hypnotist for The Adjusters #52 only to realize that it doesn't fit, and I have to scrap nearly 4000 words. I hate when that happens. So long, Mesmerizing Mephisto. Maybe you'll get your day in the sun somewhen else in the story line.

Throughout May and June, I'm asking for your input about the sort of kinks you might want to see in The Adjusters.



I have a few stories bookmarked that are worth pointing out, if only to jerk me out of this blue mood that's been hanging over my head since the weekend—for no particularly good reason either.

The main theme here seems to be blackmail and coercion with a touch of incest for a few of them too.

Saving a Marriage, by Otto Weininger. No description, but the story of a wife who learns about her husband's affair and agrees to go with him see a marriage counselor that, well, manages to convince her that she could be putting in more effort to save her marriage.

The Stimulus Plan Slut, by Ahabscribe: “Wife & mother turns whore to save her family's home.”

A Bad Neighborhood, by Ted E. Bear: “This story chronicles a summer in which a mother & her 13 year old son are held captives by a local gang. The gang uses the mother as a sexual play toy, forces her to prostitute herself for them, and even makes her have sex with her son and his friends for their amusement.” Ted E. Bear is an author I've always particularly enjoyed.

Wednesday, February 15, 2012

Stories About Wives Being Used and Abused

Writing Journal: It's mid-February, and I'm gently hacking away at The Adjusters #31, my appendix (addendum? postscript? thing-I-don't-know-the-name-of?) It's already up to 8000 words, which is too much because it's not even halfway done. And I know that the main reason I'm building up the word count is to delay the inevitable—where the inevitable is of course getting to the end, because I have no freakin' idea how it ends...



I was away from my computer this weekend, which explains my lack of posting. I'm presuming nobody really cared. My gut feeling is that the audience for this blog is not literally hanging on to my every word. If you feel otherwise, please holler, and I'll work harder at keeping you appraised of possible interruptions of service.

Onwards, story-wise. I ran into a story on Storiesonline a couple of days ago for which my only response was a heartfelt Holy Fuck! It's by the grandiosely named God Of Porn, and it's called Imaginary Man: “A loving husband tries to persuade his beautiful black wife into cheating on him with white men.” It starts out as a pretty standard cuckold story, albeit with a reversal of the typical interracial stereotype common to such stories, but then you hit chapter 4 and it veers left into crazy hot territory. The psychology of the characters feels right, which is rare in such stories. The story's ongoing, and I hope that the author continues with it, because I'm really keen to see where it's going, and how it's getting there.

While we're on the topic, take a look at some classics on a similar theme of wives used and abused.

Lisa Laten and Not My Story wrote Poker Wife: “A young bride is tricked into having sex with her husbands friends. She falls deeper into degradation as she is blackmailed into becoming a sex slave for the pleasures of others. She discovers this has all been done to her to get revenge on her older sister but it is already to late for poor Lisa.” Definitely a classic of the genre, and the corruption of the wife and is nicely done. The story was started by Lisa Laten and eventually completed by Not My Story. The story, according to the author (not sure which of the two), was in tribute a few classics including the hilarious Randy Raped my Wife by Carnal Knowledge: “Husband lets his friend rape his wife, while he watches.” Hilarious in that the story is so over the top yet played straight, not because of the subject matter. In fact, I think this was the first story I ever read where there was nonconsensual sex that did not involve mind control. I seem to recall also that there was more to this story than posted above, but I have not been able to find the rest, if it ever existed.

And this brings us to an all-time favorite of mine in the genre, Rusty Shackleford's The Cop's Wife: “Police officer Tom Barkley had arrested Marcus Dupree on the charge of dealing cocaine, and had testified against him at the trial. After Marcus was sent to jail, Tom sold the dealer's coke, and the word of this got back to Marcus. Now that he was out of jail, having served his time, he was going to extract his revenge on Tom by making his wife his whore and fuck toy.” Straight up, and taking no scenic detour to get to the juicy bits, this is fine smut right there. It's twisted in all the right ways. The video scene in Part 2 sold the story for me, years ago...

Sunday, January 29, 2012

A Few Classic Stories

Writing Journal: Sick as a dog this week. Getting a little bit better now, but still wobbly. Worshipping at the altar of NyQuil, I am. And let me tell you, when you're sick, the last thing you want to write is a sex scene. Talk about not being in the zone... Perhaps not surprisingly, progress on The Adjusters #30 was minimal, but progress was nevertheless achieved. And it looks like I'm painting myself in a corner too, where I may have to write a piece in the style of Alexandre Dumas. You'll see what I mean when we get there, assuming I don't come to my sense before then and edit the whole thing out of existence.



As I promised at the beginning of the year, let me start pulling stories out of the bag marked Classic Stories. What's a classic story? Beats me. My own personal definition is a story that I've run into a while back—five years or more?—and that I've seen discussed and praised online amongst both cognoscenti and amateurs alike.

Today, here are three classic stories under the general theme of turning a girl into a slave pretty much against their will through manipulation of some kind.

First up, Terri Madison's Second Place: “Terri and Danielle have been rivals all of their lives, competing in love and competing in business, with Terri coming out on top most of the time. Until one day Danielle fights back and turns Terri into a docile slave." A wonderfully twisted story by a master of the genre. Terri is just wonderful and writes humiliation like no one else. She deserves her own Author Spotlight, that's for sure.

Second up, Hunter's Samantha Learns her Place. No official description, but it's basically the story of poor Samantha, a cheerleader who attracts the attention of Hunter Smith, who manipulates her into basically doing his bidding, slowly turning her into the perfect little pleasure toy. Psychologically very dark, and altogether satisfying when you're just in that sort of mood. As far as I can tell, Hunter has not written anything else, which is a damned shame.

Third up, Ninja Turtle's Cheerleader Picture: “The story of a high school cheerleader slowly turned into a bimbo sex slave slut.” As with the description, as with the story. The language will not win any literary contest, but it's nonetheless effective. The story is surprisingly similar to Hunter's story above, both in premise and in theme, but it digs a much deeper hole for its protagonist. Psychologically even darker, I would say, although I realize the qualification is highly subjective. It's an interesting exercise to compare and contrast the two developments.