(Sorry this is late. I wish I had a good reason, but really, it's just bad time management skills.)
Here is October's installment of The Adjusters, “Sanderson's Plan”, wherein Sanderson responds to Jenn's plea for help, and an ally is recruited.
As usual, comments welcome.
I'll also remind you that we have a Speculation Thread available for general discussion. (A thread which I read but do not comment on.)
The Adjusters #45 - Sanderson's Plan
Please help Jennie. Those three words haunted Richard Sanderson like nothing else ever had in his life. They haunted him on the days following the night organized by Gutierrez. He had two days off, the first of which he spent recovering from that night’s events, nursing a headache that had to be a consequence of whatever drug cocktail they had given him. He spent that day in the semi-darkness of his apartment, his roommate thankfully gone for the day.
The following day he indulged in remembering the events of that night, and the arousal he had experienced. Because there was no way he could deny that it had been an incredible experience, something that even in his wildest fantasies he could not even begin to imagine. And the sex… Allison blowing him expertly… Jennie throwing herself at him… Jennie and the waif Lillian, or Mouse as everyone else called her, pleasuring each other… Those images mixed with images of Felicity, spread before him, calling him to her.
For the hundredth time since that night, he pulled out the photograph from his wallet, a small photograph that had never left him since he took it, years earlier. It showed Felicity, his ex-girlfriend, posing on a bed, her delightful body sheathed in a tight black silk slip with a deep cleavage and exposing her legs, those legs he loved so much, legs wrapped in dark stockings. She was posing with her arms above her head, her hands holding her hair up, a come-hither look on her face. She had allowed him to take the picture, a one-time thing, before fucking him nearly blind.
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Next month: “Awake”.
Perfectly paced chapter, also nice touch with special encounter flashback, though I had hoped to see next flashback by the end about how Cassandra was dumped and what she did then :)
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My page 15 – For a second, she reminded me of Cassandra, and he shivered. “You’ll owe me favor,” she said.
“You’ll owe me a favor…..
My page 26 – He felt bad about the spanking, about losing control, if only for a few seconds, and he wanted to make her feel better. Not she seemed to be…..
Not that she seemed to be complaining……
I really liked the flow of this chapter. It just moved from one thing to another with ease. So we see Sanderson starting a chain of events that he is not sure where it is going to lead. My thinking is that he has not planned on running away with Jen just yet. I think he is just trying to get her out of Gutierrez’s grip. I think the escape will come as a result of someone else moving them in that direction. At this point, I am starting to think that Cassandra is running the show. It may have been Gutierrez’s idea, but given his aversion to strong women, he may have inadvertently created a monster that he cannot control. Why do I feel like Cassandra may be the one who “organizes” Jenn’s escape?
I imagine you're probably busy, BT3, but do you plan to do anymore blog posts recommending stories?
ReplyDeleteNot worried about recommendations, although they are nice, more concerned for the continuing story of the Adjusters. Looking forward to the first of the month.
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