Wednesday, August 15, 2012

Back with a Mind-Control Story

Writing Journal: I'm back. Started on The Adjusters #35 while I was away.



A long story to get us back on track. I came across this one a few years ago, but had completely forgotten about it. It has some nice moments.

It's Millenium Products, by Talespinner: “Kate is a voluptuous but conservative young mother of a beautiful teenager, but when she agrees to test a new perfume she finds herself changing her points of view and slowly turning into a cum addicted slut, dragging her own daughter along.” As the description implies, a twisted tale of mind control, with some nontrivial humiliation undertones. Ah! Who am I kidding—undertones? It's pretty much straight-up humiliation from the get-go. There are some very nice set pieces in there, if you're into that genre. It's in three parts, with the first two parts better edited than the third—the author freely admits English is not their first language.

4 comments:

  1. The Millenium Products story has piqued my interest, I'll start reading it as soon as I finish this book. Thx for the recommendation.

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    1. Oh!! Very nice story. I just loved when Linda tasted semen for the first time and how the girls teased Nicole's father.

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