Writing Journal: It's mid-February, and I'm gently hacking away at The Adjusters #31, my appendix (addendum? postscript? thing-I-don't-know-the-name-of?) It's already up to 8000 words, which is too much because it's not even halfway done. And I know that the main reason I'm building up the word count is to delay the inevitable—where the inevitable is of course getting to the end, because I have no freakin' idea how it ends...
I was away from my computer this weekend, which explains my lack of posting. I'm presuming nobody really cared. My gut feeling is that the audience for this blog is not literally hanging on to my every word. If you feel otherwise, please holler, and I'll work harder at keeping you appraised of possible interruptions of service.
Onwards, story-wise. I ran into a story on Storiesonline a couple of days ago for which my only response was a heartfelt Holy Fuck! It's by the grandiosely named God Of Porn, and it's called Imaginary Man: “A loving husband tries to persuade his beautiful black wife into cheating on him with white men.” It starts out as a pretty standard cuckold story, albeit with a reversal of the typical interracial stereotype common to such stories, but then you hit chapter 4 and it veers left into crazy hot territory. The psychology of the characters feels right, which is rare in such stories. The story's ongoing, and I hope that the author continues with it, because I'm really keen to see where it's going, and how it's getting there.
While we're on the topic, take a look at some classics on a similar theme of wives used and abused.
Lisa Laten and Not My Story wrote Poker Wife: “A young bride is tricked into having sex with her husbands friends. She falls deeper into degradation as she is blackmailed into becoming a sex slave for the pleasures of others. She discovers this has all been done to her to get revenge on her older sister but it is already to late for poor Lisa.” Definitely a classic of the genre, and the corruption of the wife and is nicely done. The story was started by Lisa Laten and eventually completed by Not My Story. The story, according to the author (not sure which of the two), was in tribute a few classics including the hilarious Randy Raped my Wife by Carnal Knowledge: “Husband lets his friend rape his wife, while he watches.” Hilarious in that the story is so over the top yet played straight, not because of the subject matter. In fact, I think this was the first story I ever read where there was nonconsensual sex that did not involve mind control. I seem to recall also that there was more to this story than posted above, but I have not been able to find the rest, if it ever existed.
And this brings us to an all-time favorite of mine in the genre, Rusty Shackleford's The Cop's Wife: “Police officer Tom Barkley had arrested Marcus Dupree on the charge of dealing cocaine, and had testified against him at the trial. After Marcus was sent to jail, Tom sold the dealer's coke, and the word of this got back to Marcus. Now that he was out of jail, having served his time, he was going to extract his revenge on Tom by making his wife his whore and fuck toy.” Straight up, and taking no scenic detour to get to the juicy bits, this is fine smut right there. It's twisted in all the right ways. The video scene in Part 2 sold the story for me, years ago...
does somebody has the complete story of Randy raped my wife, i think that there is 17 chapters to that story
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