Here is February's installment of The Adjusters, “Awhirl”, wherein Jenn and Sanderson enact their plan to run away from the Institute.
As usual, comments welcome.
I'll also remind you that we have a Speculation Thread available for general discussion. (A thread which I read but do not comment on.)
The Adjusters #48 - Awhirl
The ward has gone dark for the night. Everyone’s asleep. I have my nightlight, of course, and I’m happy about that, because a soft light is what’s best for my mood right now.
Everything is quiet. Last week, they transferred me into a double room with the redhead girl called Allison. I like her. She’s smart, even through the slight dulling of the drugs they give us. It’s not too too difficult to guess what her particular kink is—she’s always sucking on a lollipop, and Cassandra’s nickname for her is Cock-Sucker. That Richard Sanderson sometimes blushes when Cassandra says that tells me that he’s partaken of Allison’s particular skills. Probably at the party thrown by that pig Gutierrez that he attended, that party where he first fucked me. Or where I first fucked him.
My name is Jennifer Hansen, and when I’m not drugged up to my eyeballs, I’m a raging slut that can’t control her cravings to be taken, and taken hard. Which is why I’m locked up in this insane asylum called the Institute. But I’ve got an escape plan.
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Next month: “Cassandra's Plan”.
Awesome, always with a surprise twist)
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ReplyDeleteThat was a very nice twist at the end with Mouse being the target and not Jenn. Some rather interesting questions to be answered. Has Jenn tamed Cassandra and is Cassandra now submissive to Jenn? Are we seeing a tie in between Jenn’s story and the re-emergence of Daniel because of the Connelly brothers? Even though Daniel did not have any direct contact with them, they did show up when he was hunting the specials. Will Daniel check up on Liz and discover her friend is now missing only to discover where she went? Is Liz starting to show signs of the syndrome which may prompt her husband to contact Daniel? With Jenn now staying put and her story being released, will this give Daniel time to begin discovering where she is? It appears that Jenn is learning to control Jennie, which will definitely help when she does actually escape. Will we see the escape now include Mouse? Will Sanderson read her story after he submits it? And if so, what effect will it have on him? The storyline appears to have so many directions it can take, which makes it even more interesting because it will interesting to see which direction the author takes it.
Some suggested corrections:
My page 21….and I can’t help moan and twist my hips. Jennie is there, awake, aware, and she wants more. …and I can’t help but moan……
My page 44……..outside to realize that this chick that should here isn’t anymore because she’s shaking her ass…. ….outside to realize that this chick that should be here isn’t…
wow- great chapter. wonder how the connelly brothers fit into everything? are they connected to the adjusters? I really wonder who Calypso is now? Someone connected to the adjusters or to the connelly brothers? Our author introduces characters for reasons and connections.
ReplyDeleteHope to see Cindy in the next book more.
Wondering what the new plan will be with mouse- thats the next chapter i presume.
so many questions
1) is cassandra broken by jennie now?
2) i think the plan is to take mouse now too otherwise why would jennie stay. Clearly she has a hero/heroine complex just like daniel
Jennifer is leaving a trail of breadcrumbs, hoping Daniel will find her. She's wondering how Daniel will react when he sees her. Will he still want her?
ReplyDeleteAnd if Jennie is so good at figuring out exactly what gets someone off, how will Jennie react when she sees Dan?
Excellent questions, those. Excellent questions.
DeleteThanks for the comments, folks. Glad you liked the installment. Most of your questions will be answered—though whether they lead to more questions remains to be seen.
ReplyDeleteOh, and danny123—thanks for the typo report. They've been corrected. (I also fixed the end where I noticed that I had let Jenn slip in a couple of "I"s and "me"s—oops. It's tough to make someone speak in the third person...)
Aww, I thought that was intended, like her mental bounds coming slightly loose
DeleteI wish I was that devious :)
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