Writing Journal: Still gently slogging through The Adjusters #52 and #53. It's all good, if slow.
Throughout May and June, I'm asking for your input about the sort of kinks you might want to see in The Adjusters.
Sorry for the silence—I was away and also nothing particularly interesting came through my smut feed, except for a few chapters updates to stories that I'm tracking. Might as well get those out of the way.
A new chapter of Ashley's Revenge by TallMarriedMan: “Ashley gives him a gift that she knows his wife never would.” The story is still excellent.
A new chapter of Consequences by Xleglover: “Jen and Mike ‘separate’ and Jen moves in with Frankie.” A straight-up cuckold husband story, one that seems to leave few people unaffected (either in a good way or a bad way), but with some pretty interesting ideas and scenes. Xleglover is a bit of an acquired taste, and recently his stories do sometimes seem to spin without going anywhere. This one is no exception. But I still enjoy it. (Though I wish it went darker than it undoubtedly will go, more like Husband's Fantasy Backfires.)
Finally, a new mind-control story, The Coin by Ryansstory: “Ryan discovers that no good deed goes unrewarded...” Four chapters out at the time of this post, and it seems to be headed in a dark direction. A man finds a coin that gives him mind-controlling powers, but it's not entirely clear that the coin isn't actually controlling him. I'm looking forward to see if it goes anywhere.
Friday, June 27, 2014
Sunday, June 15, 2014
The Dangers of Hypnotism in Smut Fiction
Writing Journal: I posted this to MCForum over the week. It summarizes my writing week nicely, trying to write a little happy fluffy shortish tale—something to distract me a bit from the morass of anxieties that is plotting The Adjusters these days:
Throughout May and June, I'm asking for your input about the sort of kinks you might want to see in The Adjusters.
Ran across an oldish story I hadn't read before. Some quite nice twisted scenes, though it veers a bit in the middle. It's Brad, The Hypnotist by Notemale: “A black hypnotist changed our lives forever.”
Here are a few additional stories under that theme of a hypnotist that takes advantage and fucks up a couple.
Georgia by Piscalrotcam: “A dedicated wife is hypnotized and told to forget her marriage. It was her husband’s idea.”
Rewriting History by Wind7sailor: “A married couple meets an old high school friend, who has become a stage hypnotist.”
Not quite as the above, but still good, and short, The Hypnosis King by Jkendale: “Wife & her friend are enjoyed while under hypnosis.”
INT. AUTHOR'S STUDY - NIGHT A dark study illuminated only by a small desk lamp. The floor covered with discarded PAPERS, some crunched into balls, other spread out like leaves in the fall. The AUTHOR is sitting at his desk, writing madly, pen flying over the paper. He's pale, looks malnourished. On one of the sheets of paper, the title of the manuscript. HYPNOSLUTZ. A bottle of scotch on the desk, with a glass. The reward for a successful writing session. Once in a while, he looks at the bottle, longingly. A SHADOW creeps over the desk, unnoticed by the author who keeps on writing. It's the FIRST MUSE. FIRST MUSE (O.C.) (drawling) Darrrrker!... The author nearly jumps out of his chair. Turns around to see a tall figure dressed all in black with a hood peering over his shoulder. The face is not visible. He is pointing at the manuscript. AUTHOR Jesus Christ! You scared the shit outta me! FIRST MUSE Darrrrker!... AUTHOR What? No! I told you, I want this to be— FIRST MUSE Make it darrrrker!... AUTHOR —happy, you know? Light, fun, the kind of stuff that people actually enjoy reading. Maybe the stuff that they can read with their kids. Well, you know what I mean. No angst, no fear, no worries. Happy. Light. FIRST MUSE Make it DARRRRKER!... The author, busy arguing with the first muse, does not notice the arm of the SECOND MUSE—slim, feminine, bare—reaching over his other shoulder and pointing at a line on the sheet of paper in front of him. SECOND MUSE (seductive) Make her dirty here... AUTHOR (violently startled) Fuck! What's with you guys? He swivels to look at the second muse, a beautiful blonde with soft blue eyes, wearing a red dress that reveals a whole lot more of her body than is entirely decent even in the privacy of the study. SECOND MUSE (seductive) She's too nice. She gets everything she wants. She's treated well, a princess. You don't want that, do you? I know you. You want to see her do things that in her right mind she would never do. The kind of things that would make a hardened whore blush. The kind of things that no self-respecting woman would ever do for the man she loves, let alone one she hates— AUTHOR Wait a minute! She doesn't hate him! She loves him! FIRST MUSE Darrrker!... AUTHOR Shut up! SECOND MUSE Come on, you know you want to. Use her. Abuse her. She's just a fictional character anyway, right? Turn her into every teenage boy's wildest wet dream. FIRST MUSE Darrrrker!... AUTHOR (blocking his ears) NO! Happy! A shortish light, happy, sex-positive tale! The THIRD MUSE, a little LEPRECHAUN, jumps atop the desk. Bounces about, fingers twirling. THIRD MUSE (high-pitched) Shortish? SHORTISH? (laughs) Nonsense! He bounces some more. Picks up a few sheets of the manuscript. Shoves them in front of the author. Points to three or four places. THIRD MUSE (CONT'D) Here! And here! And here! Change this and that and presto, it's epic! EPIC! Change this and that and it opens up this stupid shitty story like, like... SECOND MUSE (whispering) Like the girl's pussy when the villain shoves his huge cock inside her and ruins her for your silly little hero. FIRST MUSE Darrrrker!.... THIRD MUSE What she says. Come on, you can make it epic, man. You're aiming for what, eight thousand words? Ten thousand? Make it eighty thousand! Eight hundred thousand! Eight million!!! AUTHOR But I already got an epic going. And it's kicking my ass! THIRD MUSE (dancing around the desk, laughing) Wuss! Wuss! Wuss! SECOND MUSE (seductive) Wusssss! FIRST MUSE Darrrrker... The author reaches for the scotch, writing goals be damned.
Throughout May and June, I'm asking for your input about the sort of kinks you might want to see in The Adjusters.
Ran across an oldish story I hadn't read before. Some quite nice twisted scenes, though it veers a bit in the middle. It's Brad, The Hypnotist by Notemale: “A black hypnotist changed our lives forever.”
Here are a few additional stories under that theme of a hypnotist that takes advantage and fucks up a couple.
Georgia by Piscalrotcam: “A dedicated wife is hypnotized and told to forget her marriage. It was her husband’s idea.”
Rewriting History by Wind7sailor: “A married couple meets an old high school friend, who has become a stage hypnotist.”
Not quite as the above, but still good, and short, The Hypnosis King by Jkendale: “Wife & her friend are enjoyed while under hypnosis.”
Sunday, June 8, 2014
A New Chapter by GrantLee
Writing Journal: Excellent writing week, followed by a crappy writing weekend. Easy come, easy go, I guess. I did get started on The Adjusters #53, since there's no reason why it cannot be written in parallel with #52. And because we haven't had an installment this month, here's a (still raw and needing much editing) first stab at the beginning of #53, as a sort of preview:
Throughout May and June, I'm asking for your input about the sort of kinks you might want to see in The Adjusters.
From out of nowhere today came a new chapter of Madison's Lesson by GrantLee: “Madison Benedict bent at her waist...” It's the story of a poor mother and ex-wife that is coerced into sex by, well, pretty much everybody, it seems. It's really good. But updates abysmally slowly.
At the other extreme, here's a weird but entertaining story, Alex in Pornoland by SirSinn: “Alex wakes up to a different world after an accident.” Warning: incest, and large artificial breasts.
James McGregor—Jim to his employees, Jimmy to his close friends—did not hesitate to cross the threshold of the nondescript building.
Whatever else one might say about James, and one could say many things about James and not all of them heartwarming, being prone to indecision was not one of them.
When James ran into a problem, James stopped long enough to determine the extent of that problem, formulate a plan to solve said problem, and then enact said plan. That approach had served him well for the previous twenty-five years, from the time he wrestled control of Electro Manufacturing Incorporated away from his then father-in-law and grew it into the largest industrial control panels manufacturer on the West Coast.
That approach had served him well years later when he determined that his then wife—the daughter of the father-in-law in question—after a solid fifteen-years marriage that had yielded two sons, was simply not worthy of being the wife of one of the most successful businessman on the West Coast. She was unhappy, and was letting herself go, and it had become almost embarrassing to be seen in her company.
When he realized that his then wife had become a liability, that she was a problem, he formulated a plan and enacted it without hesitation or pity. It had been a simple matter to hire a handsome out-of-work actor to seduce and sleep with his then wife, all the while having a private investigator follow the couple and document the affair in exquisite graphic detail. Armed with such incontrovertible evidence, suing her for divorce was a short and easy affair. James obtained custody of his son and managed to leave his ex-wife with hardly anything through a carefully orchestrated strategy of claiming great mental distress and public embarrassment. His wife’s lawyer did manage to obtain a one-time lump payment for relocation that James almost contested but in a show of magnanimity decided to let go. That the lump payment turned out to be less than the fee he had promised the out-of-work actor but never paid due to the poor fellow’s deportation proceedings back to Canada—his visa had expired a year prior, something that had not escaped James’s careful screening of potential candidates—proved almost poetic, something that James might have appreciated had he had any fondness for poetry.
“Welcome to Family Counseling Services,” said the pleasant young woman behind the reception desk, looking up at him with a blindingly white smile. “How may I help you?”
Throughout May and June, I'm asking for your input about the sort of kinks you might want to see in The Adjusters.
From out of nowhere today came a new chapter of Madison's Lesson by GrantLee: “Madison Benedict bent at her waist...” It's the story of a poor mother and ex-wife that is coerced into sex by, well, pretty much everybody, it seems. It's really good. But updates abysmally slowly.
At the other extreme, here's a weird but entertaining story, Alex in Pornoland by SirSinn: “Alex wakes up to a different world after an accident.” Warning: incest, and large artificial breasts.
Wednesday, June 4, 2014
Mid-Week Blues
Writing Journal: Crap. I wrote a whole scene with a hypnotist for The Adjusters #52 only to realize that it doesn't fit, and I have to scrap nearly 4000 words. I hate when that happens. So long, Mesmerizing Mephisto. Maybe you'll get your day in the sun somewhen else in the story line.
Throughout May and June, I'm asking for your input about the sort of kinks you might want to see in The Adjusters.
I have a few stories bookmarked that are worth pointing out, if only to jerk me out of this blue mood that's been hanging over my head since the weekend—for no particularly good reason either.
The main theme here seems to be blackmail and coercion with a touch of incest for a few of them too.
Saving a Marriage, by Otto Weininger. No description, but the story of a wife who learns about her husband's affair and agrees to go with him see a marriage counselor that, well, manages to convince her that she could be putting in more effort to save her marriage.
The Stimulus Plan Slut, by Ahabscribe: “Wife & mother turns whore to save her family's home.”
A Bad Neighborhood, by Ted E. Bear: “This story chronicles a summer in which a mother & her 13 year old son are held captives by a local gang. The gang uses the mother as a sexual play toy, forces her to prostitute herself for them, and even makes her have sex with her son and his friends for their amusement.” Ted E. Bear is an author I've always particularly enjoyed.
Throughout May and June, I'm asking for your input about the sort of kinks you might want to see in The Adjusters.
I have a few stories bookmarked that are worth pointing out, if only to jerk me out of this blue mood that's been hanging over my head since the weekend—for no particularly good reason either.
The main theme here seems to be blackmail and coercion with a touch of incest for a few of them too.
Saving a Marriage, by Otto Weininger. No description, but the story of a wife who learns about her husband's affair and agrees to go with him see a marriage counselor that, well, manages to convince her that she could be putting in more effort to save her marriage.
The Stimulus Plan Slut, by Ahabscribe: “Wife & mother turns whore to save her family's home.”
A Bad Neighborhood, by Ted E. Bear: “This story chronicles a summer in which a mother & her 13 year old son are held captives by a local gang. The gang uses the mother as a sexual play toy, forces her to prostitute herself for them, and even makes her have sex with her son and his friends for their amusement.” Ted E. Bear is an author I've always particularly enjoyed.
Sunday, June 1, 2014
Weekend Random Links
Writing Journal: Put in a solid 1500 words into The Adjusters #52 yesterday, up to about 8500, and I'm still nowhere near the fun stuff. Writing is slow, folks, at least if you're me. (Though writing this short blurb made me think about #52 for a few seconds, and I've had what may well be a very intriguing thought... Let's see if it survives the night.) Oh, and by the way, next month's installment: “Intermezzo: Daniel Malcolm”
Throughout May and June, I'm asking for your input about the sort of kinks you might want to see in The Adjusters.
A bunch of random links to herald the coming of June.
John Kovalic nails the massive difference between good writing days and bad writing days.
Spying with Lara is a wonderful webcomics series I just discovered (and I'm late to the party, so this might well be old news to you all) and that is supremely well and done, and both sexy and funny.
Sexy times with the Miami Dolphins cheerleaders.
Oglaf might just have given me an idea for a short story.
Fascinating results of a survey by Bluebella (a lingerie company) about what men and women consider the perfect male and female body.
I know How I Met Your Mother is over, but here's an oldish article about what the author calls The Canonical Bisexuality of Lily Aldrin. (Peek around the site when you're done: The Toast is a fantastic little site with both fun and sad stories and will make you a better human being.)
Said Energizer is a videographer that does some pretty amazing work with beautiful sexy models. Here's a sample: For MEN.
A scanlation fumetto from The Groovy Age of Horror: Storie Viola 14 - I Tre Desideri (The Three Wishes).
If you're here only for the smut, here's today's selection. College Cathouse by DaviBlack: “Guy watches his girlfriend and her friend at a party.” And the girlfriend starts pimping her friend out, and the guy gets in on the action as well, and soon they have a nice little business going with lots of kinky sex. You're welcome.
Throughout May and June, I'm asking for your input about the sort of kinks you might want to see in The Adjusters.
A bunch of random links to herald the coming of June.
John Kovalic nails the massive difference between good writing days and bad writing days.
Spying with Lara is a wonderful webcomics series I just discovered (and I'm late to the party, so this might well be old news to you all) and that is supremely well and done, and both sexy and funny.
Sexy times with the Miami Dolphins cheerleaders.
Oglaf might just have given me an idea for a short story.
Fascinating results of a survey by Bluebella (a lingerie company) about what men and women consider the perfect male and female body.
I know How I Met Your Mother is over, but here's an oldish article about what the author calls The Canonical Bisexuality of Lily Aldrin. (Peek around the site when you're done: The Toast is a fantastic little site with both fun and sad stories and will make you a better human being.)
Said Energizer is a videographer that does some pretty amazing work with beautiful sexy models. Here's a sample: For MEN.
A scanlation fumetto from The Groovy Age of Horror: Storie Viola 14 - I Tre Desideri (The Three Wishes).
If you're here only for the smut, here's today's selection. College Cathouse by DaviBlack: “Guy watches his girlfriend and her friend at a party.” And the girlfriend starts pimping her friend out, and the guy gets in on the action as well, and soon they have a nice little business going with lots of kinky sex. You're welcome.
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