INT. AUTHOR'S STUDY - NIGHT A dark study illuminated only by a small desk lamp. The floor covered with discarded PAPERS, some crunched into balls, other spread out like leaves in the fall. The AUTHOR is sitting at his desk, writing madly, pen flying over the paper. He's pale, looks malnourished. On one of the sheets of paper, the title of the manuscript. HYPNOSLUTZ. A bottle of scotch on the desk, with a glass. The reward for a successful writing session. Once in a while, he looks at the bottle, longingly. A SHADOW creeps over the desk, unnoticed by the author who keeps on writing. It's the FIRST MUSE. FIRST MUSE (O.C.) (drawling) Darrrrker!... The author nearly jumps out of his chair. Turns around to see a tall figure dressed all in black with a hood peering over his shoulder. The face is not visible. He is pointing at the manuscript. AUTHOR Jesus Christ! You scared the shit outta me! FIRST MUSE Darrrrker!... AUTHOR What? No! I told you, I want this to be— FIRST MUSE Make it darrrrker!... AUTHOR —happy, you know? Light, fun, the kind of stuff that people actually enjoy reading. Maybe the stuff that they can read with their kids. Well, you know what I mean. No angst, no fear, no worries. Happy. Light. FIRST MUSE Make it DARRRRKER!... The author, busy arguing with the first muse, does not notice the arm of the SECOND MUSE—slim, feminine, bare—reaching over his other shoulder and pointing at a line on the sheet of paper in front of him. SECOND MUSE (seductive) Make her dirty here... AUTHOR (violently startled) Fuck! What's with you guys? He swivels to look at the second muse, a beautiful blonde with soft blue eyes, wearing a red dress that reveals a whole lot more of her body than is entirely decent even in the privacy of the study. SECOND MUSE (seductive) She's too nice. She gets everything she wants. She's treated well, a princess. You don't want that, do you? I know you. You want to see her do things that in her right mind she would never do. The kind of things that would make a hardened whore blush. The kind of things that no self-respecting woman would ever do for the man she loves, let alone one she hates— AUTHOR Wait a minute! She doesn't hate him! She loves him! FIRST MUSE Darrrker!... AUTHOR Shut up! SECOND MUSE Come on, you know you want to. Use her. Abuse her. She's just a fictional character anyway, right? Turn her into every teenage boy's wildest wet dream. FIRST MUSE Darrrrker!... AUTHOR (blocking his ears) NO! Happy! A shortish light, happy, sex-positive tale! The THIRD MUSE, a little LEPRECHAUN, jumps atop the desk. Bounces about, fingers twirling. THIRD MUSE (high-pitched) Shortish? SHORTISH? (laughs) Nonsense! He bounces some more. Picks up a few sheets of the manuscript. Shoves them in front of the author. Points to three or four places. THIRD MUSE (CONT'D) Here! And here! And here! Change this and that and presto, it's epic! EPIC! Change this and that and it opens up this stupid shitty story like, like... SECOND MUSE (whispering) Like the girl's pussy when the villain shoves his huge cock inside her and ruins her for your silly little hero. FIRST MUSE Darrrrker!.... THIRD MUSE What she says. Come on, you can make it epic, man. You're aiming for what, eight thousand words? Ten thousand? Make it eighty thousand! Eight hundred thousand! Eight million!!! AUTHOR But I already got an epic going. And it's kicking my ass! THIRD MUSE (dancing around the desk, laughing) Wuss! Wuss! Wuss! SECOND MUSE (seductive) Wusssss! FIRST MUSE Darrrrker... The author reaches for the scotch, writing goals be damned.
Throughout May and June, I'm asking for your input about the sort of kinks you might want to see in The Adjusters.
Ran across an oldish story I hadn't read before. Some quite nice twisted scenes, though it veers a bit in the middle. It's Brad, The Hypnotist by Notemale: “A black hypnotist changed our lives forever.”
Here are a few additional stories under that theme of a hypnotist that takes advantage and fucks up a couple.
Georgia by Piscalrotcam: “A dedicated wife is hypnotized and told to forget her marriage. It was her husband’s idea.”
Rewriting History by Wind7sailor: “A married couple meets an old high school friend, who has become a stage hypnotist.”
Not quite as the above, but still good, and short, The Hypnosis King by Jkendale: “Wife & her friend are enjoyed while under hypnosis.”
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