I'm finding myself busier than I'd like this week, so today's post will be short and sweet. I'll make it up to you by giving a pointer to a long story though.
For your reading pleasure, a just-completed dark and twisted submission and blackmail story by JustALittleRougher entitled Diane Blackmailed: "Introduction to Diane and her dilemma, after years of consensual BDSM, one client decides to blackmail her and pimp her out." Some very nice scenes in there, and a character driven to the edge of despair, in a semi-realistic way. I love, for no reason that I can verbalize easily, the whole dying her hair red to satisfy a customer.
Wednesday, April 27, 2011
Sunday, April 24, 2011
A Few Submission Stories (And One Not So Much)
Happy Easter, if you celebrate it. If not, then Happy Fertility Day.
Slogging through revisions to The Adjusters #16. Both it and #17 are a bit different, as you'll see, and it makes it more difficult to get right. We'll see how it turns out. But let me just say for future reference: no more stories with umpteen thousand characters. Sheesh, what a mess.
Anyways... A few stories caught my attention this week. All of them on Storiesonline, so you'll need an account there if you don't already have one. (You should: it's free, and there are some amazing stories on there.)
First up, Diary of a Wife, by Hawthorne: "It takes years for a married couple to finally figure out that she needs to submit, and he wants to dominate. Once she reveals her past, he makes her is own... in every way." A submission story, very well done. I especially like the first chapter, where the wife reveals herself for what she really is. Some really hot stuff in there. Too bad that the story seems to have been abandoned.
Next up, Tarnished Innocence, by Shani 34: "The new employee seemed to be perfect, but Mike discovered that she wasn't all that she seemed. She had lied to him, and to previous employers, and when he challenges her she admits it. And she accepts punishment, and asks for more. Mike tries to give her the excitement she craves." Another submission story, clearly. Some nice scenes in there, and a good pace.
Last up, the biggie -- Conflicted, by Eldridge: "Damon, an 18 year old high school athlete, learns some startling, yet very interesting things about his cheerleader younger sister, and the things she does with her best friends. As he slowly gets involved with the group of girls, however, he begins to realize that there may be more to his newfound happiness than he first realized." As the author points out, a "slow building story with lots of plot and subplots, as well as lots of sex in the later chapters." No shit. I'm three quarters into it, and it's just phenomenal. Lots of sex, good characters, amazing dialogue, and even the psychology is not that far off. (Warning: some incest.) It reminds me a lot of An Ordinary Teenage Sex Life by Bluedragon -- which I've talked about before -- both in style and in content, and it holds up very well to the comparison. Read it, that's all I'm going to say about it.
Slogging through revisions to The Adjusters #16. Both it and #17 are a bit different, as you'll see, and it makes it more difficult to get right. We'll see how it turns out. But let me just say for future reference: no more stories with umpteen thousand characters. Sheesh, what a mess.
Anyways... A few stories caught my attention this week. All of them on Storiesonline, so you'll need an account there if you don't already have one. (You should: it's free, and there are some amazing stories on there.)
First up, Diary of a Wife, by Hawthorne: "It takes years for a married couple to finally figure out that she needs to submit, and he wants to dominate. Once she reveals her past, he makes her is own... in every way." A submission story, very well done. I especially like the first chapter, where the wife reveals herself for what she really is. Some really hot stuff in there. Too bad that the story seems to have been abandoned.
Next up, Tarnished Innocence, by Shani 34: "The new employee seemed to be perfect, but Mike discovered that she wasn't all that she seemed. She had lied to him, and to previous employers, and when he challenges her she admits it. And she accepts punishment, and asks for more. Mike tries to give her the excitement she craves." Another submission story, clearly. Some nice scenes in there, and a good pace.
Last up, the biggie -- Conflicted, by Eldridge: "Damon, an 18 year old high school athlete, learns some startling, yet very interesting things about his cheerleader younger sister, and the things she does with her best friends. As he slowly gets involved with the group of girls, however, he begins to realize that there may be more to his newfound happiness than he first realized." As the author points out, a "slow building story with lots of plot and subplots, as well as lots of sex in the later chapters." No shit. I'm three quarters into it, and it's just phenomenal. Lots of sex, good characters, amazing dialogue, and even the psychology is not that far off. (Warning: some incest.) It reminds me a lot of An Ordinary Teenage Sex Life by Bluedragon -- which I've talked about before -- both in style and in content, and it holds up very well to the comparison. Read it, that's all I'm going to say about it.
Wednesday, April 20, 2011
Two Mind-Control Stories on SOL
Still feeling somewhat off, so I'll keep this one short. I'm slowly hacking through the revisions to The Adjusters #16. At the end of last week I managed to figure out what was missing and it helps fill out a hole that was glaring at me further out in my draft of #21. So at least that's getting taken care of.
Storiesonline, one of my favorite story sites (which requires registration, but it's free, unless you like reading a lot), has introduced a new feature that links a story to other stories with similar tags, which is a great feature. And last weekend led me to two mind-control stories that I had never read before.
The first is Young Lust, by Lost: "Josh has a crush on his beautiful neighbor, but can a teenager really hope to get a woman like that?" A nicely twisted story, where our hero is given an impossible choice. One of those stories that you wished was longer.
The second is Wandering Minds, by MWTB, who was many other interesting stories posted: "What would you do if you suddenly discovered that you could ride along in people's minds, see what they saw, feel what they felt, experience what they experienced? Two teenagers find out." Two very sympathetic main characters, and some hot sex. MWTB likes his BDSM with a healthy dose of submission, and that shows here. The mind-control aspects are pretty subdued, more along the lines of mind reading that outright control, but they're used judiciously.
Storiesonline, one of my favorite story sites (which requires registration, but it's free, unless you like reading a lot), has introduced a new feature that links a story to other stories with similar tags, which is a great feature. And last weekend led me to two mind-control stories that I had never read before.
The first is Young Lust, by Lost: "Josh has a crush on his beautiful neighbor, but can a teenager really hope to get a woman like that?" A nicely twisted story, where our hero is given an impossible choice. One of those stories that you wished was longer.
The second is Wandering Minds, by MWTB, who was many other interesting stories posted: "What would you do if you suddenly discovered that you could ride along in people's minds, see what they saw, feel what they felt, experience what they experienced? Two teenagers find out." Two very sympathetic main characters, and some hot sex. MWTB likes his BDSM with a healthy dose of submission, and that shows here. The mind-control aspects are pretty subdued, more along the lines of mind reading that outright control, but they're used judiciously.
Wednesday, April 13, 2011
Flash Games
It's been a rough last couple of weeks, which explains (but does not excuse) my lack of presence here. Things are slowly getting better, but I'm still down in the dumps. That it's raining buckets out isn't helping any. And on the writing side, I'm typing up and revising episodes 16 and 17 of The Adjusters, and it's a mess. So all in all, bleh! -- if you'll permit me the expression.
In the meantime, even my smut reading has taken a dive. So instead, tonight, let's look at something different. Violet Blue over at TinyNibbles posted a week ago about a Flash game called Konashion, or more descriptively Super Deepthroat. It's exactly what you would expect. What's interesting about it is the mods that are being developed:
I admit, it's well done. And a worthy successor in a long line of similar games. One of my favorites -- and that it's Spider-Man themed is completely coincidental I swear! -- is this one. A bit filthier, both in image and in dialogue (which is somewhat cringe-worthy, but still amusing in places).
But neither of those are as good as my all-time favorite Flash game, variously called Up the Wahzoo, or Strip the Tech. Part of the attraction is that it has an actual storyline. And the graphics are well done. And I find the girl hot -- does that make me weird? (To play, follow the on-screen instructions. When stuck, move the arrow on the screen and pay attention to where the arrow or image changes, indicating where something is clickeable.)
Know any other interesting online game of that ilk? I'm always up for something entertaining.
In the meantime, even my smut reading has taken a dive. So instead, tonight, let's look at something different. Violet Blue over at TinyNibbles posted a week ago about a Flash game called Konashion, or more descriptively Super Deepthroat. It's exactly what you would expect. What's interesting about it is the mods that are being developed:
The community and mods this game has grown is impressive, as seen in the Super Deepthroat forums. Mods include different backgrounds (such as a crowd of onlookers or distant planets), different hair, different skin colors, tattoos and facial piercings, bondage accessories like collars, chains and rope harnesses and much more.
There is even a hair archive wiki. I was so enthralled by the creative mods and users’ interest in making her into their favorite Suicide Girl, Erin from the Esurance commercials, or Jessica Rabbit (though most mods are for Hentai and cosplay characters) that I put together a small sample gallery after the jump.
I admit, it's well done. And a worthy successor in a long line of similar games. One of my favorites -- and that it's Spider-Man themed is completely coincidental I swear! -- is this one. A bit filthier, both in image and in dialogue (which is somewhat cringe-worthy, but still amusing in places).
But neither of those are as good as my all-time favorite Flash game, variously called Up the Wahzoo, or Strip the Tech. Part of the attraction is that it has an actual storyline. And the graphics are well done. And I find the girl hot -- does that make me weird? (To play, follow the on-screen instructions. When stuck, move the arrow on the screen and pay attention to where the arrow or image changes, indicating where something is clickeable.)
Know any other interesting online game of that ilk? I'm always up for something entertaining.
Sunday, April 3, 2011
New Story: The Adjusters #15
Sorry about the delay folks. Been having some problems with the intertubes this week. Hence the lack of Wednesday post. Things seem to be back to normal, so let's get back to work.
First off, as I mentioned earlier, I went back and rewrote part of #12, as well as the parts of #13 that relied on #12. It's now a bit closer to what I had in mind originally, although I'm still not entirely happy with it. Here is the edited #12 and edited #13.
Second, here is April's episode of The Adjusters, "Confrontations", wherein various parties confront each other, with varied results.
As usual, comments welcome.
EDIT: @Arzac reminds me that you have a Speculation Thread available for discussion. (A thread which I read but do not comment on.)
15 - Confrontations
It was late morning on a sunny and crisp Saturday when Daniel walked
up the path that led to the large mansion that housed the Delta Iota
Kappa fraternity.
It had been a tough week. Seven days since he saw the DVD that Biff --
as Daniel presumed -- had left for him, on which the young man had
fucked his fiancee. There was no point in sugarcoating it. Biff had
fucked her. And she had seemed to enjoy it. Figuring out why was one
of the questions to which Daniel had no answer. And to find the
answer, he had to find Jenn.
He had filed a missing-persons report with the police, and had been
hounding them for the past several days. They had not made much
progress, and seemed generally unconcerned about it. They claimed that
students often took a week off without warning, and that they could
not be expected to jump the gun every time. They would investigate,
and get back to him. At first Daniel had been angry, but Radhu had
reminded him how Serena had ranted about the police's inefficacy when
Marjorie went missing. So he had mobilized his and Jenn's friends
around school, and they had put up signs and called everyone they
could think of to keep a look out for both Jenn and Biff.
Continue reading...
First off, as I mentioned earlier, I went back and rewrote part of #12, as well as the parts of #13 that relied on #12. It's now a bit closer to what I had in mind originally, although I'm still not entirely happy with it. Here is the edited #12 and edited #13.
Second, here is April's episode of The Adjusters, "Confrontations", wherein various parties confront each other, with varied results.
As usual, comments welcome.
EDIT: @Arzac reminds me that you have a Speculation Thread available for discussion. (A thread which I read but do not comment on.)
15 - Confrontations
It was late morning on a sunny and crisp Saturday when Daniel walked
up the path that led to the large mansion that housed the Delta Iota
Kappa fraternity.
It had been a tough week. Seven days since he saw the DVD that Biff --
as Daniel presumed -- had left for him, on which the young man had
fucked his fiancee. There was no point in sugarcoating it. Biff had
fucked her. And she had seemed to enjoy it. Figuring out why was one
of the questions to which Daniel had no answer. And to find the
answer, he had to find Jenn.
He had filed a missing-persons report with the police, and had been
hounding them for the past several days. They had not made much
progress, and seemed generally unconcerned about it. They claimed that
students often took a week off without warning, and that they could
not be expected to jump the gun every time. They would investigate,
and get back to him. At first Daniel had been angry, but Radhu had
reminded him how Serena had ranted about the police's inefficacy when
Marjorie went missing. So he had mobilized his and Jenn's friends
around school, and they had put up signs and called everyone they
could think of to keep a look out for both Jenn and Biff.
Continue reading...
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