A slow week this week. So let me just leave you with two stories about our favorite web-slinger. I don't usually read fan fiction (most of it's pretty bad, especially the smutty ones), but these two have a fairly involving story line. And come on, Mary Jane, everybody's favorite redhead?
First, a recent one, by SmithPortinoi, Chronicles of Spider-Man: "Spider-Man is defeated by the most unlikely enemy." The description doesn't render the story justice, but all of Literotica's descriptions are like bad movie taglines. Still, an entertaining story. And the mental image of Mary Jane drenched in semen from the second page just gets the ball rolling something fierce!
The other one is an older story, much older, at least in Internet-time. It's from Dimitri, who has penned a lot of very interesting long sagas, Spider-Man: Manipulations: "During the story, Herald Of Armageddon, Mary Jane Watson-Parker was knocked unconscious by an EMP Wave, along with all the non-super-powered inhabitants of New York City. Upon coming to, she discovered herself to be in the clutches of Norman Osborn, whom she thought had died several years earlier. At the climax to HOA, Mary Jane was revealed as one of the participants in Paradox's orgy, but it was never revealed how she got from being in Norman Osborn's clutches to having sex with a large number of super heroes. Until now." Yeah, I know, not much of a description. But trust me, good story. Also, no need to read Herald of Armageddon, although that's also a pretty good story (if you're into the Marvel Universe, at least, and have no problems keeping all those superheroes straight).
How about you, any good superhero story you like? Share your recommendations in the comments.
not a big fan of spiderman-wasn't a fan of the movie, nor the comic. so these stories are "eh" to me.
ReplyDeletedon't mind that your being vague about the adjusters- i'd rather get some answers, than none. in reality wish your pace of writing was faster (as i think everyone wants to know what will hapen in chapter 14). But its understandable to write several chapters ahead when you have 4-5 story arcs.
Wondering who that mystery woman is? perhaps a woman from the good doctor's past?
Thanks for the stories, but I am not so much into cuckold stories. I like the story arc in your story more for the mind control aspect.
ReplyDeleteBy one of your earlier comments to a posting and a hunch I get when reading the story I have the feeling that Daniel is already adjusted but not by that fraternity. Maybe someone from his past works for the company the doctor is hiding from or something like that? :)
For the future I have only one big request. I hope you don't plan any kind of bimbofication for at least Jenn or Serena. I like intelligent woman, submissive, controlled but intelligent. The scene in #11 with Serena, Bernie and Jackson was very hot. I liked very much how you made Serena the 'willing victim' using her full wit and skills to pleasure them.
@Met - No worries re: the stories. I mostly want to expose folks to some of the stuff I run across that I find interesting. If even one story catches your eye, I've done my job. I certainly don't expect everyone to like what I like. That'd be... well... weird and scary.
ReplyDelete@Astardis - I'm not crazy about bimbofication in general, mostly because it's pretty hard to move on from there "dramatically", if you allow me to use a term that kind of jars with smut. Glad you liked the scene in #11 - it was fun to write.
BTW, @Astardis, I always thought that the second story (Manipulations) was more MC than cuck (which the first one I agree is at some level). Mostly because Dimitri has a pretty clear MC fetish. His Celebrity Hypnotist series was quite popular way back when. Before it got kind of repetitive and pointless, that is.
ReplyDeleteI've got a theory about Daniel and the doctor's old employer. Honestly I think that's the most interesting place to take this - there's a lot you can do there - since there isn't much you can do with Jenn at this point (yes, I do respectfully feel you've shown your hand way too early there. Though I do hope you get Jenn out of Biff's hands sooner rather than later. Haven't checked my email so I yet - won't be able to for a bit)
ReplyDelete@onceagain: what your thought's on Daniel and doctor's employer? he was previously controlled?
ReplyDeletehave to second don't want to see Jen in Biff's hands too long as w know what he would do. though it is entertaining.
There are two reasons I think that Daniel is already adjusted. First, the more obvious one is Daniel's behaviour or non behavior the first time he surprised Biff and Jenn in their flat, the way he reacted to her bracelet and his inability to connect the dots even though he got enough nerdness in him to like Kitten's Den.
ReplyDeleteThe second reason is the mysterious lady. Her reaction towards Serena gives us the impression that her intentions are quite similar to those of DIK but seems to have no idea that she might be already available. Besides, I don't believe a fraternity is having many female members. At the same time she clearly wasn't at that café by pure luck which indicates that she followed Daniel. So, following Daniel seems to point in a direction that says he is already involved in something outside of DIK. Since I don't believe, that Bulgroz is using a 'Deus ex machine' event and creates a completely unrelated and new situation, this lets me believe our mysterious company has something to do with him.
What did they do to Daniel? The only thing that seems clear without to much speculation is, that he is somehow adjusted to 'look around' the obvious and finding other reasons for strange behaviour but adjustment.
Why leads too far into pure speculations without facts. Could be an adjusted family member whose behaviour was made to ignore. But that's just my mind trying to find reasons since we don't know much about Daniel's past beside where he grew up.
Just my 2 cents. :)
Astardis
I'm going to refrain from commenting on the latest round of comments to avoid spoilerage. But I'm here, and I'm reading, and I'm plotting...
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