Meanwhile, I'm almost done with #17. My aim has always been to have at least one sex scene in every episode, but for that one, I found it difficult to work one in. Part of the problem is that the episode is a transitional one (it's tentatively called "Intermissions"). But I think I figured a way out of that hole. We'll see how it's received.
I'm about to start on #18, which hadn't existed in my head until earlier this week. I want to use it to illustrate the life of the dick girls, and give some cheap thrills in the process. My working title is "A Day in the Life". Should be fun to write, and it will segue into the seven episodes making up the back end of Book II. But first, I need your help.
Informal Poll: In #18 I'd like, among other things, to give a couple of scenes of Serena and Kyra being used by the Delta Iota Kappa brothers as they go about their business. My question to you: is there anything you'd like to see? I have some ideas, but I'm happy to consider opinions from the gallery. As usual, no promises, but if something catches my fancy I'll happily work it in.
In my last post I talked about blackmail stories. Here, I'd like to focus on an author that has made blackmail stories his speciality. (I'm assuming male here, but I admit to having absolutely nothing on which to base this assumption. I'm happy to be corrected.)
I discovered Vulgus maybe two years ago, completely by accident, on some random site that does not exist any longer, and rediscovered him through the Dijan Understories archive, where many of his stories are archived. More of his stories are available through Storiesonline.
Vulgus is quite prolific, and his tales tend to run long, which is something I love. I believe that really hot stories derive from getting to know the characters and care for them, which requires some room. That's not to say that short stories cannot be hot, of course, just that the mechanisms involved there are more subtle, and probably rely much more on the author connecting with something that's already there within the reader. But I digress.
I think of Vulgus a little bit like I do of Stephen King -- he has a few basic storylines he really likes, and he recrafts them into endless variations that maintain their own individuality. But you get the feeling that it's that way because that's the stories he enjoys telling, and he could write something else if he wanted to, and it'd be just as great -- he just chooses not to.
And that's fine with me. There are some real gems in his collection. Not all his stories are about blackmail, but many are. And they are rather rough; nonconsensual sex does occur with nontrivial frequency, so be warned. Here are some favorites of mine, in no particular order:
I Belong to Snake Now: A naive young wife who spends too much time home alone begins to explore the internet for the first time. After a few relatively harmless chats she finds herself being blackmailed into becoming a sex slave to a big bad biker.
I have just learned a valuable lesson. It has been, and continues
to be, a very costly lesson. Let me tell you about it.
My name is Ashley. I am 22, 5'6", 115, bright red hair, and as of
just over a year ago, very married. I met my husband in college
and we married as soon as I graduated last year. He graduated a
year ahead of me and is already well on his way to being the next
Donald Trump. Except for the hair of course. [...]
My Rival Wins; My Wife and I Lose: A not so friendly childhood rival becomes the employer of a young couple and fakes some documents and photos to blackmail them with. He abuses the young wife in order to torment the husband, his lifelong rival.
Ray and I had known each other all of our lives. Our parents were
best friends and next door neighbors so we didn't have any choice
but to try and get along. But for some reason, and I don't know
if either one of us could say what it was, we never liked each
other. We had maintained an uneasy truce and a less than friendly
rivalry since we started playing together at our parent's
insistence. Even back then though, even at the ages of three or
four we didn't like each other. [...]
A Bad Reaction: A young mother is falsely accused of a crime and convicted. She becomes a pawn and a sexual toy to an unscrupulous Parole Officer, she and her daughter both. EDIT: Someone reminded me that this story contains an underage character. To be honest, I tend to ignore that part and focus on what happens to the mother, but you may want to skip this story if that sort of thing squicks you.
I'm not even sure exactly what happened that evening, the evening that it all started. I was on my way up the stairs to my second floor apartment after a long, hard day at work. The elevator was out of service again. It was out more than it worked, so I wasn't surprised. I felt something on my butt and I didn't even think about it, I just reacted instinctively. I turned around and, seeing one of my neighbors behind me I did something that I had never done in my life. I drew back and slapped his face as hard as I could.
I saw the look of surprise on his face as he fell over backwards and rolled down the stairs to fall at the feet of his wife, who had stopped to check the mail. She screamed and that is the last thing that happened that evening that wasn't a part of the big haze. [...]
A Lesson in Social Justice: A young couple are taught a lesson in race relations when a black man moves in next door.
There are people who will not like some of the things that I
write in this story. If you are of the opinion that the south
will rise again (or that it should), if you are convinced that
the American Civil War was fought for financial reasons or to
secure state's rights then I highly recommend that you skip this
story. Some of the things I write here will offend your
sensibilities.
I will admit that a lot of what happened to me is a result of my
racist upbringing. If I had not been raised in a small southern
town by racist parents and if all of my friends had not been
racist I might not have done the things that I did. For it was my
misguided actions that triggered the events that I'm writing
about, events that changed the lives of both me and my husband.
I'm not saying that I deserved what happened to me, or what is
still happening to me. But I can't deny that I brought it on
myself. [...]
Amanda's Continuing Education: A young female high school counselor is seduced by one of the young students she is mentoring. His accomplice records the affair with a video camera and the young woman is forced into sexual servitude.
I am in more trouble than I ever imagined possible. I have always
been very goal oriented and very much in charge of my life. Or at
least I thought I was. I knew from an early age that I wanted to
work with troubled kids in some capacity. I excelled in school
and I was on the honor roll from the first grade until I
graduated from school. I always took the tough subjects and my
grades were perfect so I had no problem getting into the
university that I had my heart set on attending. Even if my
father had not graduated from there I would have had no problems
getting in.
I carried a 4.0 grade average throughout my undergraduate studies
and it seemed like I breezed through my post graduate work in my
chosen field. It was so easy it scared me. Really! When it was
all over and I had my Doctorate I kept thinking, "Is that all
there is?" I had a nagging fear for a while that they were going
to send me a letter some day and tell me that I forgot to do
something to meet some requirement and they had just discovered
it. [...]
Brian is Gone: Kim's husband is stationed in Iraq. She is drugged while attending a friend's birthday party. She is raped and filmed in compromising positions and blackmailed.
It was the first time I had gone out to have a little fun since
my husband had left for Iraq. His National Guard unit had been
called to active duty and before we had time to take a deep
breath he had been gone. He had been gone almost three months and
I was bored to death. All I ever did now was go to work and go
home and watch TV and write letters to my husband. I was a little
upset that I wrote to him every night and I got a letter from him
only once a week, if that.
I knew that conditions were rough over there and that he was
having a hard time of it. But just a note to say that he was okay
and still loved me would have been nice. We had only been married
for a little over a year and I knew he loved me, but I really
worried about him and I wanted a little reassurance. No, I wanted
a lot of reassurance, not so much that he still loved me, I knew
that he did. Rather that he was still alive and uninjured and
holding up alright. [...]
Brooke Can't Drink: An awful lot of bad things happen to a young wife as a result of a little problem she has when she drinks.
Everything seemed to come together at the same time in a terrible confluence of events that seemed destined to destroy me and my marriage. It all stemmed from a series of errors in judgment and very bad choices that quickly added up to a nightmare come true.
The first bad choice was made almost six months earlier. Taken by itself it would have been insignificant. It would have had no effect on my life at all. The small furniture manufacturing business that my husband and I started and have been running fairly successfully almost since we married eight years ago developed a small liquidity problem. It should have been no big deal. It happens to small businesses all the time. [...]
The next story is not strictly a blackmail story, but it hits so many of my buttons that I have to include it here.
A Wife with no Options: Ken decides to leave his wife of three years for a long list of very good reasons. In desperation she agrees to do anything and everything he asks of her if he will just stay with her. He puts her to the test, with the idea of getting some revenge. Maybe he should have done that three years ago!
I was furious when I left work. I don't think I had ever been so mad in my life. I had a chance to cool down a little as I dealt with the rush hour traffic. That was not my normal reaction to all of the idiots on the road. By the end of my normal commute I usually wished that I had a pair of fifty caliber machine guns mounted on the front and rear of my car so that I could shoot the idiots around me.
But this evening the crawling traffic had given me time to think and I no longer intended to storm into the house as soon as I got home and start screaming at my wife. [...]
How about you? Which is your favorite Vulgus story?
At least one story credited to Vulgus on ASSTR, "Raped Degraded Daughter", is actually softcover sex novel from 1982 by an author called "Ted Leonard". I suspect that "Vulgus" pseudonym may be a curator (if we're charitable) or plagiarist (if we're not) of vintage erotic fiction.
ReplyDeleteWhoa! The plot thickens. Thanks for the heads-up, @Anonymous, I'll check it out.
ReplyDeleteVacation in Hell has it all. Check it out
ReplyDeleteSweet. I will. Thanks for the pointer.
DeleteBrooke Can't Drink - very hot.
ReplyDeleteI Should Have Taken the Train 1&2 - Part 1 was great. Part 2 was good up til midway, then it started getting unrealistic.
The Teacher's a Pet - I could see it happening. A tad unrealistic in the list of conspirators, but I could suspend my disbelief. I even thought the ending was rather realistic.
Repercussions - very dark. My introduction to the author and my first time reading something so abusive. I liked that there wasn't a happy ending. Very realistic even if nothing else was.
A Little Help from my Little Sister - Good clean fun. Absolutely believable and none of the darker tones. Definitely ranked as #1.
Karen's Bitch Training - Incredibly dark. Wow. All that time to build the characters, and it ends in a flash. Not very believable, but it had its moments. The ending didn't work, however.
Charity Auction Slave - Excellent piece of work. Clean and with a limited cast. Not a lot of build up, but something for everyone. A close #2, very close.
Angela Transformed - The first half was great, but it quickly got unbelievable with the public displays. Cops and teachers would have been on them like white on rice after the first five minutes. This is always a problem when you have massive behavior changes being put out there for anyone to see. The reader just can't accept that nobody would notice little Suzy going from good to slut overnight.
Be Careful What you Wish For - Very hot for the first half. Then we get into the daughter being used at school and it quickly goes downhill. Again, public performances attract a lot of eyes, and not just the ones you want.
Note that most of the stories have a nipple piercing scene that Vulgus seems to do very well at. There's something about a good girl getting big slutty rings through her nipples that bashes their psyche, and the writer is able to capture that part very well. Maybe that it's such a visible mark of their status, but it does add to the heat of the story.
A lot of the stories end too abruptly. You don't go through months of physical/mental trauma and then bounce back in a few hours. I think a lot of the stories would do well with less time spent leading up to the antagonist leaving the story and more of the protagonist/s experiences after they've regained their freedom. If you're going to turn them into a slut/whore/slave, at least make their return to normalcy take time. Otherwise it appears rushed.
On the down note: Vulgus has a real problem with including political rants that don't fit the narrative. I can't count the number of times I've seen him lambast the republicans in a tirade that just seemed to pop up out of nowhere. No other politics were mentioned. The world seems entirely fictional. Then, bam!
I've exchanged emails with Vulgus on a number of occasions and his response is entirely as expected. He claims he has the right because he lives in SC and is "completely surrounded by conservatives." When I pointed out that all this does is skew the story with completely irrelevant verbiage and insult a portion of his readership, he expressed no concern. It's his way of venting and that's all there is to it.
I found it rather laughable that his anti-republican/conservative message is coming through a story where he happily writes about women being raped, tortured and killed..... but his email tag-line equates the Tea Party with the Taliban.
Let me get this straight: The Taliban is known for their horrible treatment of women. You write about women being treated horribly, fiction though it may be. But Conservatives are the American Taliban?
Post Script: I can believe that Vulgus is not the original author of a lot of the stories on SOL. While I have no evidence, I note that they don't all have the same flow or style, and it isn't simply an author evolving over time. Compare scene structure in his shorter stories, for example. Green Clouds v. Charity Auction Slave. Pie for the Kids, for example, strikes me as someone trying to capture the spirit of another author without resorting to outright copying. Word choice, sentence structure, pacing, material...
DeleteYou would think that a "professional" writer would like to maintain the flow in his story and not throw in completely irrelevant political rants. Or, if he did, he'd like someone to point it out so he could edit where needed.
Just my thoughts. I could be wrong.
Lots to comment on here. Thanks for sharing your thoughts on the stories.
DeleteI tend to set my Unbelievability Bar pretty high on smut, so the "no one reacts when exhibition happens" twist doesn't faze me as much as other things. As long as the story is internally consistent, and obey its own narrative logic, I'm happy. My Unbelievability Bar is set much lower on traditional fiction. Smut is just its own category. (Cognitive dissonance FTW.)
About stories ending too abruptly: yes, definitely. Even before getting to the "victim gets over her ordeal too quickly" issue, the fact that the plot resolves in basically half a chapter at the end essentially out of the blue always takes me by surprise.
About the political rants: yeah, I tend to dislike political references in smut unless they actually are relevant to the story, which is usually pretty rare in that context.
About the authorship question: the style across many of his stories shifts wildly, in ways that I find difficult to believe unless Vulgus is an incredible stylist. I'm thinking in terms of sentence structure, sentence length, and word usage. So I wouldn't be surprised if indeed he was not the author of some of them. But I've never been able to find another source of authorship, nor even any clue as to the original of the stories, if they are indeed "recycled" from somewhere else.
vulgus, I love your stories you can contact me at Queenofspades1985@yahoo.com. Would love to talk sometime.
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